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~Age 15~

(Name) sighed as she was once again up in her room. She hated being in her room all day, but there are days where she just had to be up there. She couldn't help that her father's girlfriend, (least favorite girl name) was a huge bitch. It's not that (name) minded Alfred having a girlfriend, it was just the one he chose happened to be snobby and extremely stuck-up. (L/f g/n) only cares about herself, and to (name), it was obvious. She would always ask for expensive things that she doesn't need and she would act all lovey-dovey when Alfred is around, but when he isn't, she enters bitch mode.
All (name) wanted right now, was for Alfred to notice that (l/f g/n) was just using him for his money, and because she is an attention whore. A MAJOR attention whore. Whenever she is over, she would drag all of Alfred's attention to (name), to herself, and (name) would be forgotten about while (l/f g/n) was there.
(Name) just sighed again, but then lightly smiled when she heard arguing going on downstairs. Alfred and his "girlfriend" had been arguing a lot lately, which made (name) a little happy. Maybe Alfred finally realized that he was just being used, or he just got tired of buying expensive things for her. Whatever it was, she heard her father yell at (l/f g/n) saying that he never wanted to see her again, then a door slam and a car start.
(Name) waited for the car to leave, then went downstairs and into the living room, only to find Alfred sitting on the couch with his head in his hands. She went over and sat down beside him. "Papa," (name) said, "What's wrong?"
Alfred shook his head and sighed before saying, "It's (l/f g/n). I got tired of her asking me to buy her expensive things. Because of her, I barely have enough money for food right now. I told her that I need money for food to feed you and me, and she just said to give you to your grandparents. That;s.....That's just when I snapped I guess." He stayed silent for a minute, then spoke again, "Just... The very thought of giving you away, even to close family members and friends, makes me want to curl up and cry in a corner."
(Name) nodded, then hugged him tightly. She began thinking for a minute, then smiled and said, "Hey Papa."
Alfred hugged her back and let out a  quiet "hm" before taking a deep breath.
(Name) looked at him and smiled. "Why don't we go to the park? You know, the one we used to go to when I was young?"
Alfred smiled and nodded before getting up and grabbing his car keys. "Sure... Let's go!"
Again, like I said before, I think Alfred would take serious problems....seriously.
I took one of the fanfics I wrote before and decided to make it into a series (well sort of)

Part 1: [link]

Next: coming soon~


~Alice~

Part1 : [link]

Part 2: You are here~

Part 3: [link]
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artluver4evur Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Hmmm for least favorite girl name I used bitch
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NinjaWolf111 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
"Hey, papa?"
"hm"
"I'm going to rip out her intestines and shove them down her throat"
"wut."
Yeah, when someone messes with Alfred, my 2p messes their face up
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ChibiYaoiPro Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
... Okay then xD

~Alicia~
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Memichow Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Writer
Awwww that is just so lovely and i was once in that position but it was my mother instead of my Father hehe.
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ChibiYaoiPro Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm pretty much in that position right now (it's my mother as well) so maybe that's what influenced me to write this O.o
xD

~Alice~
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Memichow Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
Awwww, that's beautiful :'D
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ChibiYaoiPro Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~ ^_^

~Alice~
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
You're welcome <3
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Kinky-Kirara Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
;u;
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